Africa C/C please thank you for having a look if you do have a look at this fantastic poem?

There are some good lines: 'a white man's shadow' contrasts perfectly with 'her black soul'. Cotton thin arms is another good phrase. A good narrative poem Caz. After the nine moons etc we get 'a million stars/soundlessly scream' What a way to begin this amazing work. Brilliant. You must share this around the web. This is very very good.